Feedback The introduction paraphrases the question and clearly tells the examiner what the essay will discuss in the main body paragraphs.
This essay will firstly discuss, how having fixed punishments could lead to a more competent judiciary system as the biggest advantage. Introduction Obesity has become a huge concern as an increasing percentage of the population have become overweight and this has put a tremendous strain on the healthcare authorities, leading to increased costs.
This roadmap should let the examiner know what the topic of discussion is, as well as your position in relation to the topic, and you may also choose to briefly explain how you plan to develop the essay.
I am convinced that It is always just one sentence long so you will have to practice summing up your opinion in one sentence. Thesis statements are very important but only in question that ask you for your opinion. Secondly, this essay will discuss how this may lead to people being punished in the same way for both minor and major crimes as the primary disadvantage.
What problems does this cause? Again, your main body paragraphs should have only one main idea so it should be easy to spot these and then write a sentence about them.
I am a native English speaker and I am an English teacher, so the sentences should be good, shouldn't they?
While the prompt can give you some clues about how to approach your opening paragraph, make sure you use your own words when writing your introduction.